Show, don't Tell Writing with Suzy Vadori

105. How Brains of Different Ages Read (And How You Can Write for Them!)

Tue, 09 Jun 2026 00:00:00 -0600

Book Coach and Author Sam Cameron is back on the podcast to talk with Suzy this week about the uniqueness of Teenage brains.

They discuss:

Different strategies you should be aware of when writing for young adults ages 10-20.
Differences between writing for adults and writing for kids as an audience.
How to realistically portray younger characters, regardless of who your audience is
How to avoid harmful tropes and stereotypes when writing diversely

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104. BONUS: The Truant Pen Podcast- Practical Tips for Show, don't Tell

Thu, 04 Jun 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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For today’s podcast, I’m delighted to welcome my friend and fellow author/ editor/ book coach, Suzy Vadori.

Suzy is Calgary Bestselling Author of The Fountain Series (The Fountain, The West Woods, Wall of Wishes). This fantastical series has received three Aurora Nominations for Best Young Adult Novel. She is represented by Naomi Davis of Bookends Literary Agency.

Suzy is the founder of the Inspired Writing Community, a Resident Writing Coach for Writers Helping Writers, a touring member of the Young Alberta Book Society (YABS) and a former Program Manager for When Words Collide (WWC), a festival for readers and writers.

Suzy specializes in breaking down complex writing concepts for newer writers into manageable steps, to get the book idea exploding in their minds onto the page in a way that will make readers take notice.

You can learn more about Suzy’s books and coaching/ editorial work on her website:

https://suzyvadori.com/

She also hosts the fabulous Show, Don’t Tell podcast which you can find here:

https://showdonttellwriting.buzzsprout.com/

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103. The Self Publishing Learning Curve

Tue, 02 Jun 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Suzy chats with Indie Author Rachel E Baird this week about the process behind her decision to independently publish her Romantasy novel, High Tide. She shares a behind-the-scenes look at what it really takes in terms of research, skills, time, and money to launch a book in 2026.

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102. Building a Writing Community

Tue, 26 May 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy and Book Coach Stephanie Dethlefs as they discuss the key to furthering your writing journey: building a community. Know what to look for and what to avoid.

Mentioned in this Episode:

Enrollment in the Writer's Cottage Open May 20-28th 2026

Show don’t tell Writing Podcast: Episode #43 The Value of Critique Partners with Julie Artz

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101. Five Lessons Learned After 101 Books

Tue, 19 May 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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After working on more than 101 books in the past year, Suzy has started to see patterns emerge. In this episode, she shares with listeners five valuable lessons and answers the question "Can you look at a rough draft and tell if the book will be successful?"

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100. Creative Burnout

Tue, 12 May 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy as she chats this week with writing coach Erin Noller about creative burnout. Learn how it is different from regular burnout, how to tell if you are in the thick of it, and what to do to get back that creative spark!

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99. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] From the Seed of an Idea to a Story

Tue, 05 May 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Sometimes you have just the seed of an idea, with no clear path on how to expand it into a whole story. This week, Suzy works with Author Tracie Renee who has written a poem and wants to expand it to a novel-in-verse. They discuss where to begin and strategies for teasing out a full idea.

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98. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Adult Fantasy with Sarah Miller

Tue, 28 Apr 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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This week, Suzy reviews a page from an Adult Fantasy novel. She reviews strategies for making meaning using inner thoughts and close third person perspective.

Learn how adjusting pacing and revealing stakes can keep engagement high for your readers!

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97. How to Change the Pacing in Your Writing with Sam Cameron (Part 2)

Thu, 23 Apr 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Now that you know what tension is, how do you slow things down when you want to amp up the tension? In this episode, Suzy and Sam explore pacing and how you can change it up in your own writing, and when you need an outside perspective.

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96. Creating Tension in Your Book with Sam Cameron (Part 1)

Tue, 21 Apr 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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If you've ever struggled with understanding tension in your writing, Sam Cameron and Suzy discuss what it is, and how you can make sure you have it, before you even start writing.

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95. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Make Your Middle Grade Stand Out

Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy this week for a page review of a middle-grade novel to find out:

How to highlight themes already in your manuscript to stand out in a difficult querying environment.
How to infuse agency in your main character for an engaging reading experience
Using the elements of writing to match the pace to reader expectations

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94. Narrative Techniques for Showing and Telling with Abigail Raeke

Tue, 07 Apr 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Tune in this week to learn with book coach Abigail Raeke about the difference between scene and summary and how to use each narrative technique in your writing to focus your reader on what is really important in your story.

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93. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Middle Grade Magical Realism

Tue, 31 Mar 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy and Author Stacy Burch as they discuss how to moderate pacing with the inner thoughts, and the importance of establishing a clear want and stakes for your main character in every scene.

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92. Kiss and Tell: Writing Romance with Michelle Hazen

Tue, 24 Mar 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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If you're a romance writer looking to spice up your sex scenes, or just looking for concrete ways to up the intimacy in whatever genre you write, Michelle Hazen has written the instruction manual that will change how you look at spice!

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91. Nurturing Heart-Centered Stories with Dani Abernathy

Tue, 17 Mar 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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Join the conversation this week as Suzy and Dani Abernathy discuss how using a rooted approach and systems like the Enneagram can help you as a writer discover, nurture, and grow the story that only you can write.

Intro to the Enneagram Course

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90. The Transformative Power of Romance

Tue, 10 Mar 2026 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy welcomes Romance Author and Book Coach Emily Colin, and they dive into a conversation on how the Romance genre is both powerful and transformative, but all too frequently dismissed as fluff.

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89. Balancing Facts with Storytelling Through a Writer's Lens

Tue, 03 Mar 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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This week, Suzy chats with Fulbright Scholar and Author Gigi Berardi about her novel, Bianca's Cure, and how she came to write this 'history-driven novel.'

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88. Audiobook Production (Part 2)

Thu, 26 Feb 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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In part 2 of this series on audiobooks, Jenny Hoops of Snowdog Audio and Suzy dive into the nitty-gritty of audiobook production. Learn what kind of equipment you need for a DIY setup, and the variety of options available to you if you choose to have someone else narrate your book.

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87. Audiobooks Demystified (Part 1)

Tue, 24 Feb 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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If the idea of having an audiobook edition of your book is overwhelming, this two-part podcast episode series is for you! Suzy sits down with audiobook producer and the founder of Snowdog Audio, Jenny Hoops to start with the basics and get you up to speed on all things audiobook!

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86. 20 Ways to Get Paid as a Writer

Tue, 17 Feb 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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Mentioned in the Episode:

Show don’t tell Writing Podcast: Episode #61. 100 Rejections with Liz J. Bradley (Part 1)

Downloads:

20 Ways to Get Paid as a Writer

30 Ways to Promote Your Book

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85. Bad Showing and Good Telling

Tue, 10 Feb 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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Is it ALWAYS more important to Show? When can you TELL? Join Suzy and her guest this week, book coach Julie Artz, for an energetic conversation about when you should rein in your showing and opt to simply tell.

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84. Writing About Your Life As Fiction

Tue, 03 Feb 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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What if you wanted to write about your life, but you didn't want to tell all in a memoir? In this episode Suzy talks with Shivani Malik, PhD, about the process of writing her novel The Sky is Different Here. How she turned journal entries into a story with a compelling theme, tight pacing, and characters to remember.

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83. Not Your Granny's Grammar with Patty McGee

Tue, 27 Jan 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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If you've ever wondered when to use an Oxford comma (or what that even is!) this is the episode for you! Suzy chats with Patty McGee, one of the co-authors of the amazing grammar guide "Not Your Granny's Grammar" to demystify grammar for writers.

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82. Newsletters for Writers with Tarzan Kay

Tue, 20 Jan 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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Self-promotion and marketing are likely scary words for newer writers. This week, Email Marketing Expert, Tarzan Kay, breaks down how simple it is to start an email newsletter, and why it is the most valuable thing you can do for your future writing life.

Tarzan Kay specializes in writing emails that are fun to read and more addictive than whatever you just marathon-watched on Hulu. Her programs and DIY courses teach business owners how to write highly-addictive, story-driven emails that sell without using coercive sales tactics. She spent the last three years quietly dismantling her 7-figure boss-babe empire and building a more inclusive online business that prioritizes people over profits. She lives in Ontario, Canada with her two children and one canoe.

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81. Writing, Neuroscience, and How it Affects your Readers

Tue, 13 Jan 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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Dr. Sean Pauzauskie joins Suzy this week for a fascinating discussion of brain science, and the many ways it relates to readers and writing. They discuss his debut novel, Stage of Fools, and the journey it took to get to publication. You won't want to miss this exploration of the nature and possibilities of our wonderful brains!

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80. Applying Fiction Skills to Writing Non Fiction with Dr. Laura

Tue, 06 Jan 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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Suzy chats with the multi-talented Dr. Laura about writing fiction, non-fiction, and her new book I Wish I'd Quit Sooner.

Dr. Laura Hambley Lovett is an award-winning organizational psychologist,
keynote speaker, author, and podcast host with more than 25 years of
experience helping people and organizations thrive. As the host of the
acclaimed podcast Where Work Meets Life™, she explores the human side of
the workplace with warmth, depth, and insight.

Her upcoming book, I Wish I’d Quit Sooner: Practical Strategies for Navigating a Toxic Boss, launches in January 2026. Blending research, real stories, and actionable strategies, the book offers guidance and validation for those facing toxic leadership.

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79. Best Writing Advice of 2025

Thu, 01 Jan 2026 00:00:00 -0700

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78. 2025 Writing Recap with Suzy Vadori

Tue, 30 Dec 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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What a year it has been! Join Suzy as she recaps what she has been doing all year as an author, editor, and book coach.

Download my most popular resources of 2025:

➡️ 30 Ways to Promote Your Book (without dancing on social media!)

➡️ Suzy's Show, don't Tell Writing Guide

Listen to my most popular episodes of 2025:

67. Character First Writing and Writers' Summits with Daniel David Wallace
35. Navigating Publishing in 2025 with Mark Leslie Lefebvre (part 1)
74. Mindfulness and Writing with April Davila
73. Writing Personal Memoir with Kathaleen Sorensen
68. Fantasy with Richie Billing

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77. Where Research Meets Memoir, an Interview with Treena Orchard

Tue, 23 Dec 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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Treena and Suzy chat about how to pivot from researching a topic to writing a memoir. The differences between academic and creative writing, and how to embrace the ups and downs in your life to create connections with your audience.

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76. Behind the Scenes: Show, don't Tell in The Downloaded and The Downloaded 2

Tue, 16 Dec 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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Join Suzy and Robert for the second half of their conversation where they talk about Show, don't Tell, the unique opportunities of audiobooks, and the incredible advice that saved Roberts career in writing from disaster before it even began.

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75. Behind the Scenes: Structure Decisions for The Downloaded and The Downloaded 2 (Part 1)

Tue, 09 Dec 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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This week, in part 1 of a two-part episode, Suzy sits down with prolific and award-winning Canadian author Robert J. Sawyer. They discuss the fascinating backstory behind the decisions for the structure of his newest Audible exclusive audiobook and The Downloaded One.

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74. Mindfulness and Writing with April Dávila

Tue, 02 Dec 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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This week, Suzy chats with an award-winning author, speaker, and writing coach, April Dávila. She is the author of two books, her fiction debut, 142 Ostriches and her nonfiction book Sit. Write. Here.

They explore the mind/body connection and how it effects your writing life and journey, as well as her journey to writing this nonfiction guide.

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73. Writing Personal Memoir with Kathaleen Sorensen

Tue, 25 Nov 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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Suzy chats with Memoirist Kathaleen Sorensen (who is also her Aunt) about the life and legacy of her son, Thomas. Kathaleen wrote the book Living In the Land of the Uprights, A Story About Thomas Voss Sorensen despite not considering herself a writer. During this episode they dive into the challenges and process of writing a personal memoir.

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72. Co-Writing a Nonfiction Business Book

Tue, 18 Nov 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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This week we dive into an exciting conversation with two experts in their field. When Clark and Sonya decided to write a nonfiction business book, they didn't know what they didn't know. Join us to hear about their journey as co-authors as they tackled not only their topic, but also structure and storytelling.

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Sonya Dolguina Manager, Tax Consulting, Raymond James Financial Planning Ltd. (Canada)

Educates and advises clients on tax-effective wealth management to help them meet their unique goals.
Specialized in cross-border taxation, with years of experience advising on complex Canadian and U.S. tax matters.
Sonya is a licensed CPA in both Canada and the US (Illinois) and is currently completing the rigorous 3-year Canadian in-depth Tax program.

Clark Linton: Clark began his career in the investment industry in 1998 working as an advisor at a small, boutique investment management firm. In 2005 he transitioned his business to Raymond James and works with higher net worth clients and their families through Raymond James’ Private Investment Management Group.

Clark earned a Bachelor of Business Degree (Finance Concentration) and Minor in Economics from Simon Fraser University in 1992. He is a Chartered Financial Analyst (CFA) charter holder, earning this distinction in 2002. The CFA designation is regarded by most to be the key certification for investment professionals, especially in the areas of research and portfolio management.

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71. Writing with Dyslexia, an Interview with Author Mitzi Ocasio

Tue, 11 Nov 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this week's episode, Suzy sits down with Author and fellow Podcast Host, Mitzi of Mitzi's Let's Think About It to talk about her journey to building her business, and writing four children's books. She has amazing goals, and they dive into the challenges she has faced and overcome when it comes to being a creative with dyslexia.

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70. Behind the Scenes with a Full-Time Writer

Tue, 04 Nov 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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Suzy is back this week for part two of her interview with prolific author, Simon Rose. This week they chat about how to sustain a career in writing, and what that really looks like.

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69. Writing Time Travel for Middle Grade and YA with Simon Rose

Tue, 28 Oct 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Suzy chats this week with prolific author Simon Rose in the first of two episodes about writing time travel books for young audiences. They cover research, alternate histories, and time travel (in all directions!)

GUEST: Simon graduated from university with a degree in history and his first novel for middle grade readers, The Alchemist’s Portrait, was published in 2003. This was followed by The Sorcerer’s Letterbox, The Clone Conspiracy, The Emerald Curse, The Heretic’s Tomb, The Doomsday Mask, The Time Camera, The Sphere of Septimus, Future Imperfect, An Untimely Death, and The Order of Excalibur novels. He’s also the author of the Flashback series, the Shadowzone series, and The Stone of the Seer series. In addition, he’s the author of The Children’s Writer’s Guide, The Working Writer’s Guide, The Time Traveler’s Guide, and has written many non-fiction books.

Simon offers editing, manuscript evaluation, coaching, mentoring, and writing workshops for writers. He’s an instructor with the University of Calgary and offers online workshops for both children and adults. He also offers workshops and author in residence programs for schools and libraries.

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68. Fantasy with Richie Billing

Tue, 21 Oct 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Mentioned in this Episode:

The Fantasy Writer's Toolshed Podcast

https://richiebilling.com/

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67. Character First Writing and Writers' Summits with Daniel David Wallace

Tue, 14 Oct 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Daniel David Wallace's Website

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66. Strategies for ADHD and Neurodivergent Writers with Nicole Bross

Tue, 07 Oct 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Suzy sits down with Author, Editor, and Book Coach, Nicole Bross to talk about her new book A Novel Approach: Strategies for ADHD Writers. They dive into what makes neurodivergent brains unique, and how you can harness the strengths of your brain function to finish your own book!

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65. One Stop for Writers With Becca Puglisi (Part 2)

Tue, 30 Sep 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Writers Helping Writers

One Stop for Writers

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64. The Emotion Thesaurus with Becca Puglisi (Part 1)

Tue, 23 Sep 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Suzy sits down with Becca Puglisi, one half of the team behind The Emotion Thesaurus series of reference books to talk all things Show, don't Tell! Learn about the Thesauruses and how they came to be, along with a variety of ways to use them to amp up your own writing. You aren't going to want to miss this episode!

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63. Building a Social Media Presence for Writers

Tue, 16 Sep 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy, and social media expert and author Melissa Pruitt as they talk about the best ways to build a social media presence for writers- and why you want to be doing this in the first place!

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62. In Conversation with Short Fiction Author Liz J. Bradley (Part 2)

Tue, 09 Sep 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode we continue the conversation with short story author Liz J. Bradley about her writing process and experience with both short fiction and novel writing. Tune in for insight on how to apply what you learn in writing short stories to novels, and her #1 secret for figuring out how to juggle a plethora of writing projects.

Mentioned in this Episode:

Sci-Fi Snacks Podcast

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61. 100 Rejections with Liz J. Bradley (Part 1)

Tue, 02 Sep 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy as she chats this week with her Virtual Assistant, Liz J. Bradley, about her own writing journey. They discuss the milestone of receiving 100 short fiction and poetry rejections, and the systems and processes Liz put into place to get there.

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60. In conversation with Author Lidija Hilje (Part 2)

Tue, 26 Aug 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In part two of this conversation with Author and Book Coach Lidija Hilje dives into how she structured her book to span 20 years using a dual timeline. She and Suzy talk about how to use sensory showing details in literary fiction in order ground readers when you need to 'tell'. Finally, a round of quickfire questions about her writing journey rounds out this riveting interview!

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59. Interview with Literary Fiction Author Lidija Hilje (Part 1)

Tue, 19 Aug 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy for an interview with Book Coach and Literary Fiction Author, Lidija Hilje. The two speak about the differences between genre and literary fiction, including the defining ideas, structures, and themes. They also discuss her debut novel, Slanting Towards the Sea, and her journey from being a lawyer to writing.

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58. Show, don't Tell Page Review: Memoir with Marcel Charpentier

Tue, 12 Aug 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this page review episode, Suzy critiques a page from a Memoir with a twist- Marcel Charpentier is writing the story of his personal friend's childhood in collaboration with her. They discuss incorporating showing details and sense memory through the eyes of a child, and how to approach narrative distance.

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57. Bonus Chat with Epic Fantasy Author, Katie Fitzgerald

Tue, 05 Aug 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this special bonus episode, Suzy continues her discussion with Epic Fantasy Author Katie Fitzgerald. They discuss Katie's journey to self-publishing, how she leverages author communities to reach readers, and next-level show, don't tell writing advice.

If you're ready to dive into the epic fantasy worlds of Katie Fitzgerald, you can find out more on her website at www.katiefitzgeraldauthor.com and grab a free copy of In the Hands of Healers

You're not going to want to miss this one!

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56. Show Don't Tell Page Review: Epic Fantasy with Katie Fitzgerald

Tue, 29 Jul 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Join Suzy as she chats with Epic Fantasy author Katie Fitzgerald to talk about setting the scene for the second book in a series. Learn about the different types of readers you need to think about, and how you can recap information without infodumping.

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55. Show don't Tell Page Review: Psychological Thriller with Liz Alterman

Tue, 22 Jul 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy chats with author Liz Alterman about her page from her work in progress. They discuss the merits and pitfalls of various writing habits, and how to 'unstick' yourself when you can't seem to keep writing forward. You'll also learn about the unique style choices that can be made when writing a psychological thriller. Time to dive in!

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54. Show don't Tell Page Review: Fantasy with Alyson Hathaway

Tue, 15 Jul 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy dives into how to use showing details to bring an introverted character to life, how to sprinkle fantasy details without info-dumping, and how to avoid point of view errors.

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53. Memoir Writing with Suzette Mullen

Tue, 08 Jul 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy sits down with fellow book coach and author, Suzette Mullen to talk about Memoirs. Through the discussion of Suzette's Memoir, The Only Way Through Is Out, they discuss planning, structuring, and writing your memoir and the ways it is similar and different from fiction. Suzette shares her personal journey and how a major plot twist in her life changed everything.

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52. Show don't Tell Page Review: Action Scenes with Michael

Wed, 02 Jul 2025 07:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode, Suzy chats with fellow editor Michael, and they review opportunities to amp up the stakes in his Action Scene.

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51. Inner Circle Open House Q&A Session

Tue, 24 Jun 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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On Friday, June 20th, 2025, Suzy held an Open House for her Inner Circle membership program. In addition to a workshop, there was an open Q&A session. Tune in for a frank discussion of writers' most burning questions, including:

How do I structure my novel?
How many POVs is too many?
When do most writers fail?

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50. Celebrating 50 and Taking Creative Leaps

Tue, 17 Jun 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this milestone episode, Suzy celebrates reaching 50 years of life, and 50 podcast episodes by looking back at the choices that led her to living her writing dreams. Get ready to embrace taking creative leaps whether you are in your 20s, or 80s (or somewhere in between!) it's never to late to get your story out into the world!

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49. Define Your Book's "Takeaway" to Decide What Scenes Belong

Tue, 10 Jun 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Defining a Theme or "Takeaway" for your book can help you at any stage of the writing process. In this episode, Suzy dives into how to define your takeaway, why it matters, and how to use it to test each scene. Using the takeaway you can write a book that is laser-focused on your message, and create an experience that readers will love.

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48. Book Two Blues

Tue, 03 Jun 2025 07:00:00 -0600

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Congratulations! Your first book is a success, and you're ready to write book two! But wait... how do you guarantee that readers love book two as much as they loved your first? In this episode, Suzy examines the common pitfalls and how to avoid them when writing a follow-up book in a series.

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47. When You Can Tell in Your Writing (Show, don't Tell Part 3)

Tue, 27 May 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In part three of three, Suzy reverses course and shares the times where TELLING is preferred to SHOWING. Take note on when it is appropriate to gloss over details, skip time, and give a little more information in a direct way so that your readers stay informed and engaged in your story.

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46. Next Level Showing in Your Writing - Hunt Down Those Tells (Show, don't Tell part 2)

Tue, 20 May 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In part two of this three-part series, Suzy dives deeper into the practical application of Show, don't Tell. For this lesson, she focuses on the advanced strategies, including how to target specificity, avoid white wall syndrome, and deal with repetitions.

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45. Show, don't Tell: Why Should You Care & A New Take on the Basic Examples You've Heard Before (Part 1)

Tue, 13 May 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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Part 1 of a 3 part series breaking down Show, don't Tell in a way you have never heard before. Using evocative examples, she walks you through the basics, while elevating them to a new level. Whether you've just started writing, or have been writing for years, you will learn something new in this episode.

In part 1, Suzy tackles:

What is show, don't tell?
Why should you care?
Places in your writing to eliminate telling and increase showing
Resources to help you become a more descriptive and immersive writer.

Mentioned in the Episode:

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44. Memoir Writing and Backpack Adventures with Author Candace MacPhie

Tue, 06 May 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy chats with Memoirist Candace MacPhie about her journey (both literal and metaphorical) writing her "Back in a Year" memoir series. They talk about setting boundaries when writing a memoir, how to 'kill your darlings,' and the importance of working with a book coach or editor who understands your vision for your story.

Mentioned in the Episode:

Listening Pass Free Resource

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43. The Value of Critique Partners with Julie Artz

Tue, 29 Apr 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode, Suzy chats with book coach Julie Artz about her Critique Partner matching program called "CP Meet Cute" (register here!) They discuss the different types of people who read and offer critique, including alpha readers, beta readers, critique partners, book coaches, editors, and agents. If you've ever wondered what the difference is, this is the episode for you. Tune in to find out how to take critique and the value of a critique partner for your writing journey.

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42. Writing as a Neurodivergent Author with Melanie Marttila

Tue, 22 Apr 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode, Suzy chats with Author and Poet Melanie Marttila. They discuss Melanie's journey as a writer, through her adult diagnosis of Autism, and how that shifted how she thought about her writing and how she approaches critique and characterization.

If you've ever been confused by the writing advice "Show, don't Tell" tune in for Melanie's insight on how she approaches this using a variety of techniques to create balance and flow in her work.

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41. When and How to Work with a Publicist

Mon, 14 Apr 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy welcomes Mickey Mikkelson, publicist and founder of Creative Edge Publicity which is celebrating 10 years in business, working with creatives. They discuss how publicity efforts can help writers build their brands.

Find out more on his website: https://www.creative-edge.services/

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40. Getting Started on Your Novel with Stephanie Dethlefs

Tue, 08 Apr 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy sits down with Book Coach Stephanie Dethlefs and they chat about all the things that can get in the way of a writer getting started: both on their book, and during their daily writing practice. Stephanie offers practical and mindset advice to help you overcome the stumbling blocks that are holding you back from writing your book.

Find out more about Stephanie at her website: https://www.stephaniedethlefs.com/

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39. Author Platform with Nicole Meier

Tue, 01 Apr 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode, Suzy sits down with Nicole Meier, Author, Book Coach, and Marketing Genius to talk about the dreaded "Author Platform." Listen to learn what a platform is, why you need one, and how you may be already building one without even knowing it.

You can find out more about Nicole's services at https://bookworks.co/

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38. Interview with Memoir Author, Dr. Phyllis Heintz

Tue, 25 Mar 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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This week, Suzy sits down with memoirist Dr. Phyllis Heintz. They discuss the unique journey Dr. Heintz took through her career, witnessing and participating in major medical milestones throughout her years as a candy striper, nurse, teacher, and administrator. Learn how she was able to take these stories and over a span of 10 years compile and shape them into a compelling memoir.

Find Bedside: Nurses, Miracles, and Medical Breakthroughs on Amazon

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37. BONUS Episode: Dolly Parton's Imagination Library

Thu, 20 Mar 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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In this special bonus episode join Suzy and her assistant Liz J. Bradley to learn about a charity doing amazing literacy work around the world: Dolly Parton's Imagination Library. Learn how to support their mission to "Create a love for books and reading – give every child the start they need in education and life." We talk all things reading and Dolly Parton!

Support Dolly Parton's Imagination Library

Learn More About Dolly Parton's Imagination Library

Learn more about Podcasthon and their effort to support charities around the world

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36. Navigating Publishing in 2025 with Mark Leslie Lefebvre (part 2)

Tue, 18 Mar 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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On Friday, March 7th, 2025, Suzy sat down with Mark Leslie Lefebvre, a publishing industry veteran with more than four decades of experience, in a live publishing Q&A session. Publishing has evolved from a traditional-publishing-only model to the rise of self-publishing via digital platforms.

If you haven't listened to part one, you can find that HERE.

In part two of this two part podcast Mark answers questions from the presentation's live participants.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

https://www.writtenwordmedia.com/

Wide for the Win Book

https://writerbeware.blog/

https://www.draft2digital.com/

https://markleslie.ca/

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35. Navigating Publishing in 2025 with Mark Leslie Lefebvre (part 1)

Tue, 11 Mar 2025 00:00:00 -0600

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On Friday, March 7th, 2025 Suzy sat down with Mark Leslie Lefebvre, a publishing industry veteran with more than four decades of experience, in a live publishing Q&A session. Publishing has evolved from a traditional-publishing-only model to the rise of self-publishing via digital platforms.

In part one of this two part podcast we will share Mark's presentation and conversation with Suzy. During this discussion they delve into:

The benefits of self-publishing, including creative control, higher royalties, and direct engagement with readers
The challenges indie authors often face, such as marketing, distribution, and visibility
Practical solutions and strategies for success

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

Get the Slides from Mark's Presentation

Wide for the Win Book

https://writerbeware.blog/

https://www.draft2digital.com/

https://markleslie.ca/

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34. Story Grid with Editor Joanne Haines

Tue, 04 Mar 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode, Suzy interviews Story Grid Editor Joanne Haines about the Story Grid evaluation process. They discuss how it addresses the 5 commandments of story and how you can apply them to scenes and your overall story. They also discuss how Story Grid approaches the writing advice of "show, don't tell" in a unique way.

Connect with Joanne on her website at https://shelflifeeditorial.com/

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33. Interview with Monica Cox: Revision and Mindset

Tue, 25 Feb 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode, Suzy interviews fellow book coach, Monica Cox about the revision process. They dive deep and explore ideas about how to get yourself in the proper 'reader mindset' and share practical tips for tackling, arguably the most difficult part of the process of writing a book.

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32. Thirty Ways to Promote Your Book

Tue, 18 Feb 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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Depending on where you are on your writing journey, you may be finding out that writing your book is just the beginning of your journey as a writer. Finishing a book is a huge accomplishment, requiring significant time, energy, focus, and love. Job number one in a writer’s life is getting that darned book finished, polished, and then out into the world. But the reality in today’s market, whether you publish traditionally, use a hybrid publisher, or publish independently (Self Publish), you as the writer will have to get involved in spreading the word so that readers can find your book.

In this episode, Suzy outlines 30 different ways to promote your book, that don't (all!) involve dancing on TikTok.

Mentioned in the Podcast:

Writers Helping Writers

Download your copy of 30 Ways to Promote Your Book PDF

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31. Sustaining a Career in KidLit with Janet Fox

Tue, 11 Feb 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode Suzy chats with career author, Janet Fox, about her experiences writing "kidlit" or literature for children. They discuss how the kidlit publishing landscape has changed in the years since Janet's debut, and how to sustain a long career in writing for children and teens.

You can find more about Janet on her website at: www.janetsfox.com

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30. Project Management for Writers with Kerry Savage

Tue, 04 Feb 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode, Suzy sits down with fellow book coach, Kerry Savage to discuss how writers can use project management strategies to reach their writing goals. It's more than just a to-do list! They talk technology, SMART goals, and how to put it together with a strategy.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

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29. Interview with Author and Book Coach, Liisa Kovala

Tue, 28 Jan 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode Suzy speaks with Author and book coach Liisa Kovala about her journey and her books, but also what she's seeing as she collates stories of women writers in her podcast, Women Writing.

What are our unique challenges and opportunities as women when we're young, when we're middle aged and aging? Lisa and I are going to have a frank discussion about the ups and downs that you're not going to want to miss

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28. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] From Screenplay to YA Novel with Jordan Bloomfield

Tue, 21 Jan 2025 07:00:00 -0700

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy conducts a live page review for Jordan Bloomfield’s young adult novel, Party Boys. Originally written as a screenplay, Party Boys is Jordan’s first novel, following a group of 16-year-olds navigating friendships, football, and risky social situations. Suzy shares insights on adapting a screenplay into a novel, emphasizing how to incorporate the 5 elements of writing to elevate storytelling. Together, Suzy and Jordan workshop a pivotal scene, offering listeners practical advice on crafting relatable characters and dynamic scenes.

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27. Goal Setting for Writers

Tue, 14 Jan 2025 01:00:00 -0700

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In this episode, Suzy approaches goal setting in a strategic and measured way for writers. She tackles the different myths about writing that you may be telling yourself that are getting in the way of achieving your writing goals, and then lays out a step by step plan for setting goals for 2025.

Mentioned in the Episode:
Suzy's Video about Writer's Block

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26. 9 Tips to Write Sparkling Dialogue

Tue, 07 Jan 2025 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode, Suzy dives into one of the most critical yet often mishandled aspects of writing: dialogue. She shares her top tips for crafting dialogue that grabs your reader's attention, reveals character, and propels your story forward. Whether you struggle with punctuation, pacing, or making conversations feel authentic yet engaging, this episode will transform how you write dialogue.

Mentioned in the Episode:

Grab Suzy's Dialogue Punctuation Cheat Sheet!

Writers Helping Writers: Using the 5 Elements of Writing to Immerse Readers

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25. Interview with Fantasy Author Allyson McCollum

Tue, 17 Dec 2024 01:00:00 -0700

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In this episode of Show, don’t Tell Writing, Suzy chats with Allyson McCollum, author of the newly released paranormal fantasy novel Mors Obliviscens. Allyson shares her writing journey, from joining Suzy’s Wicked Good Fiction Boot Camp in 2021 to publishing her debut novel in 2024. Together, they discuss the intricacies of crafting a dark and layered afterlife, developing complex relationships between characters, and creating a standout story that blends mythology, folklore, and personal inspiration.

Mors Obliviscens by Allyson McCollum

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24. 2024 Writing Year-End Recap

Tue, 10 Dec 2024 01:00:00 -0700

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In this special year-end episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy reflects on her incredible journey throughout 2024. From hosting virtual retreats and launching new courses to supporting thousands of writers through coaching and editing, Suzy shares the highlights of her year and the valuable lessons learned along the way, and how you can plan your own writing goals for next year.

Episodes Referenced in this Episode:

🎙️ 9. Interview with Jennie Nash: Breaking Into the Writing Industry

🎙️ 10. Interview with Author Sheri T. Joseph: Going the Hybrid Publishing Route

🎙️ 12. Interview with Author Felicity George: Traditionally Publishing a Romance Series

🎙️ 13. Interview with Tanasha Martin: Finishing an Entire Novel

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23. The Biggest Mistakes in Fiction Books (and how to fix them!)

Tue, 03 Dec 2024 01:00:00 -0700

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In this episode of Show, don’t Tell Writing, Suzy breaks down the top five mistakes she frequently sees in fiction manuscripts—and how to fix them. No matter where you are in the writing process, this practical advice will help you avoid the pitfalls that can derail your book's success. From poorly chosen endings to bloated word counts, Suzy explains how addressing these issues can transform your story and keep readers engaged.

Resources Mentioned:

“Slay Your Bloated Word Count”

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22. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Fantasy with Lisa Tisor

Tue, 26 Nov 2024 00:00:00 -0700

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In this episode of Show, don’t Tell Writing, Suzy offers live feedback on the opening page of Lisa Tisor’s fantasy novel. Lisa, a librarian and aspiring author from Eastern Oregon revisits a story she began as a short piece over 20 years ago. Suzy provides actionable advice on showing vs. telling, grounding the reader in the story’s setting, and pacing as Lisa’s protagonist stumbles into a mysterious fairy realm. Together, they explore how to highlight the magic of the story without info-dumping.

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21. Q&A with Suzy: NaNoWriMo, AI, Author Platforms, and More!

Tue, 12 Nov 2024 11:00:00 -0700

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In this Q&A episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy tackles timely questions about National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), the impact of artificial intelligence (AI) on the writing industry, how to start building an author platform, and how to know if your writing is ready for readers.

Resources Shared This Episode:
ProwritingAid
Autocrit
Grammarly

QUIZ: Is Your Writing Ready for Readers?

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20. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Action/Adventure with Muhammad

Tue, 05 Nov 2024 01:00:00 -0700

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy provides live coaching for Muhammad’s action-adventure story, The Well. Muhammad, a Nigerian writer, shares his vision for crafting a story that reflects African culture and folklore with a larger-than-life protagonist. Suzy offers actionable advice on enhancing worldbuilding, developing character motivations, and grounding the reader in a vivid setting. The conversation covers storytelling essentials for creating an immersive adventure, especially for writers seeking to elevate their fantasy or action genres.

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19. Tackling Your Self Edit: What can you do yourself vs. needing an editor?

Tue, 29 Oct 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy walks listeners through the process of self-editing, offering practical strategies for writers to refine their manuscripts before seeking professional help. Suzy emphasizes the importance of editing as a way to ensure that the story you envision reaches your readers as clearly as possible.

➡️Have Suzy Vadori's Book Ready Self-Edit Checklist: 8 Simple Tests to Run on your Book Before Ever Sending it to an Editor, Agent, Publisher, or Reader sent to you!

Main Topics Include:

The Purpose of Editing
Different Types of Editing
Using Tools for Self-Editing
Seeking Feedback Before Hiring an Editor

Tools Mentioned:
1. Autocrit
2. Grammarly
3. ProwritingAid

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18. Behind the Scenes: What Will Make Your Query Jump Out of an Agent’s Slush Pile

Tue, 22 Oct 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this episode, Suzy goes beyond the basics to discover how to get your query letter noticed.

Topics include, the competitive nature of querying, statistics on the number of queries agents receive, and the small percentage that result in representation. She highlights the importance of grabbing an agent's attention quickly. Suzy emphasizes that simply following the rules isn’t enough to stand out.

Suzy discusses how the “Show Don’t Tell” technique can be applied to query letters. She provides examples of how to describe key plot points and character dilemmas in an engaging way that showcases the writer's voice.

The episode concludes with encouragement for writers who have faced rejection. Suzy shares insights on when to move on from a project and how to keep a positive outlook.

Get Your Query Template HERE

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17. Q&A Session from the Fall Two Day Writing Retreat Part 2

Tue, 15 Oct 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy answers questions from participants at the two-day writing retreat held at the end of September. She provides valuable insights on various writing topics including, dealing with stalled projects, incorporating backstory, introducing a large cast of characters, and keeping multiple projects on track.

Show, don't Tell in Memoir is also discussed, and how it is similar to a traditional novel.

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16. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Memoir with Susan McKelvey

Tue, 08 Oct 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this powerful episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy provides live feedback on a page from Susan McKelvey’s memoir. Susan shares the heart-wrenching story of losing her husband and grappling with her new role as the matriarch of her family while coping with hereditary disease in her children and grandchildren. Suzy helps Susan refine her page, offering insights on how to transform deep emotions into compelling storytelling. Together, they explore techniques to create an immersive experience for readers while staying true to Susan's voice.

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15. Q&A Session from the Fall Two Day Writing Retreat Part 1

Tue, 01 Oct 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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"And so the biggest thing that an agent is going to be looking for, or a reader, anybody, to catch them, to hook them right on that first page, which is really important, is why should I care about your character and what is it that they want? If you can answer those things really fast and just incorporate the worldbuilding into it.

We don't want to stop the story and give three pages of worldbuilding. If you've got that right now, rip it out and find ways to dole it in."

On September 27th and 28th, 2024 Suzy hosted an Online Writing Retreat. In this recording of the Live Q&A session, Suzy answers pressing questions from participants covering a wide range of topics on everything from finding the perfect editor, to worldbuilding from page one, to keeping pacing steady in your novel. This is Part 1 in this Q&A series.

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14. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Women's Fiction with Bobbi Jo Beaver

Tue, 24 Sep 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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"And so your opening page is really a contract with your reader, right? And so you want to give them a taste of what it is that they're going to read."- Suzy

In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy Vadori provides live coaching and feedback on the opening page of Bobbi Jo Beaver’s women’s fiction novel. Bobbi Jo, a professional photographer from Omaha, Nebraska, shares her writing journey and the inspiration behind her novel. Suzy offers guidance on improving the first page, focusing on character development, setting, and hooking readers early on. They discuss the importance of grounding readers in the protagonist’s perspective and ensuring that the opening scene clearly conveys the character's age, motivation, and context.

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13. Interview with Tanasha Martin: Finishing an Entire Novel

Tue, 17 Sep 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy sits down with Tanasha Martin, a talented writer working on her first young adult fantasy novel. Tanasha shares her journey from writing poetry and short stories to embarking on a complex multi-POV fantasy series. She talks about overcoming challenges, staying disciplined, and how a strong writing community helped her stay motivated. Suzy and Tanasha also dive into the importance of character development, outlining, and Tanasha's unique writing methods for creating a vast, immersive world.

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12. Interview with Author Felicity George: Traditionally Publishing a Romance Series

Tue, 10 Sep 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this episode of Show Don’t Tell Writing, Suzy interviews Felicity George, author of the Gentlemen of London series. Felicity shares her journey from writing her first practice novel to landing a five-book deal with Hachette's Orion imprint. They discuss the intricacies of Regency Romance, the importance of genre expectations, and the process of traditional publishing. Felicity also provides valuable insights into writing fast, leveraging writer communities, and how writing to market has shaped her opportunities thus far.

Connect with Felicity:
Instagram / Threads: @felicitygeorge_romance
Felicity's Books

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11. Q&A Session from the Day of Inspiration Summit (Part 3)

Tue, 03 Sep 2024 07:00:00 -0600

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"Every story has already been written. It's just never been written by you. And the way that you do it is going to be different." - Suzy

In this episode, originally recorded during the Day of Inspiration Summit in July, Suzy fields questions from writers at all stages of the writing process, giving insights based on her own publishing journey, writing knowledge, and years of working with clients on their own manuscripts.

Some of the Listener Questions Answered:

What is an action beat?
How do I make my main characters different in each story?
Should I be concerned if my story has similarities to a book that has already been published?
How do I find comparables for my book when preparing a query letter?
How do I get started writing my memoir?

Resources Mentioned:

Vellum Formatting Software (affiliate link)
Stark Reflections on Writing and Publishing Podcast (Mark Leslie)
Is Writer's Block a Myth?

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10. Interview with Author Sheri T. Joseph: Going the Hybrid Publishing Route

Tue, 27 Aug 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this week's episode of Show, don't Tell Writing, host Suzy Vadori sits down with author Sheri T. Joseph to delve into the intricacies of hybrid publishing. Sheri shares her unique journey in the publishing world, discussing why she chose a hybrid model for her books and how this decision has shaped her career as an author.

Key Topics explored include, What is Hybrid Publishing? Why Choose Hybrid? Navigating the Hybrid World, and Sheri's Advice for Aspiring Authors.

About the Guest:

Sheri T. Joseph grew up in a New York beach town until her family relocated to San Francisco. She went to UC Berkeley, received a JD from UC Law San Francisco, and studied economics, geography, and creative writing. She is passionate about the need for housing, and serves as executive director of a nonprofit corporation that supports creation of affordable housing for families, veterans, refugees, and vulnerable populations. She’s also a trustee for Homeward Bound, a provider of homeless services and housing. Sheri and her husband have three adventurous children, a one-eyed lab named Bailey, and live in Marin, California. Edge of the Known World is her debut novel. Author website: https://www.authorsheritjoseph.com/

Find Sheri's book, Edge of the Known World in Bookstores, or Order Online HERE.

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9. Interview with Jennie Nash: Breaking Into the Writing Industry

Tue, 20 Aug 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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"The skills are table stakes... but what differentiates a good book from a great book is that something of you comes out in that story." — Jennie Nash

In this episode of Show Don't Tell Writing, recorded during the Day of Inspiration Writer's Summit, Suzy sits down with Jennie Nash, an accomplished author and founder of Author Accelerator, to discuss the intricacies of writing, the challenges authors face, and the growing field of book coaching. Jennie shares her journey, from the realization that writing a book is more complex than most people think, to establishing a business that helps writers succeed through professional book coaching.

Jennie Nash is the founder and CEO of Author Accelerator, a company on a mission to lead the emerging book coaching industry, and the author of 12 books in 3 genres, including the Blueprint for a Book series, which teaches a framework for laying a strong foundation for a novel, memoir, or nonfiction book. Author Accelerator has trained over 250 book coaches through their book Coach Certification Program. Jennie’s own book coaching clients have landed top agents, six-figure book deals, and spots on the New York Times and Wall Street Journal bestseller lists. For a free video series on becoming a book coach, go to her website HERE

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

Suzy's Beta Reader Question List
Book Coaching Video Series (affiliate link)

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8. Q&A Session from the Day of Inspiration Summit (Part 2)

Tue, 13 Aug 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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“What I like to do with writers is when you've got like a ton of suggestions on a revision pass, just deal with them one at a time. That's all you can do”

In this Q&A episode, Suzy dives into more writing questions from the Day of Inspiration Writing Summit, covering topics from revision strategies to understanding when and how to move or cut scenes, handling word count expectations, and finding a good writing group.

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7. On Writing Your First Book: What I Wish I Could Bottle and Gift to You to Help You Write It Faster

Tue, 06 Aug 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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"If there's one thing I always want to share with writers, it's that all the work has to get done. No beta reader, editor, or publisher is going to do it for you. You've got to do it. This is your book."

In this episode of Show, don't Tell Writing, Suzy dives into the challenges and techniques for writing your second book faster than the first. Suzy shares personal anecdotes, discusses common pitfalls, and offers practical advice to help writers speed up their writing process without sacrificing quality. She emphasizes the importance of understanding that every writer's journey is unique and highlights the significance of perseverance and consistent effort.

Resources:
Click HERE to request Suzy's Next Steps Worksheet mentioned in the episode

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6. Q&A Session from the Day of Inspiration Summit (Part 1)

Tue, 30 Jul 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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In this engaging Q&A session, recorded live during the Day of Inspiration Summit, Suzy Vadori addresses a range of questions from aspiring writers. Suzy dives into the intricacies of writing backstory, the benefits of coaching at different stages of your manuscript, and how to effectively build a platform as a nonfiction writer. This episode is packed with practical advice for writers at all stages of their journey.

Main Topics:

The role and handling of backstory in fiction writing.
The timing and benefits of working with a writing coach.
Effective strategies for building a writer's platform.
Tips for writing collaboratively with a writing partner.
Managing and balancing multiple characters in epic fantasy.

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5. Practical tips to tackle a manuscript/book that’s too long without cutting the scenes you love

Thu, 25 Jul 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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Episode 5: Practical tips to tackle a book/manuscript that’s too long without cutting the scenes you love

In this episode, Suzy discusses the importance of adhering to word count norms in publishing. She offers practical tips for reducing word count without compromising the quality or content of your manuscript. Whether you're writing middle-grade fiction or epic fantasy, these strategies will help ensure your book meets industry standards, setting you up for success.

Main Topics Discussed in this Episode:

· Genre-Specific Word Count Expectations

· Consequences of Ignoring Word Count Norms

· Tips for Reducing Word Count

Slash Filler Words
Eliminate Filter Words
Reduce Dialogue Tags

· Case Study: Outlander

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Remember, the book you’re writing is going to open doors you haven't even thought of yet, and I can't wait to help you make it the absolute best to can be. If you're feeling called to write that book, keep going and I'll be right here cheering you on. See you again next week!

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4. Interview with Author Jessica Bull: Traditionally Publishing a Mystery Novel

Thu, 18 Jul 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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Episode 4: Interview with Author Jessica Bull: Traditionally Publishing a Mystery Novel

"Writing in the tradition of Austen Fiction is inviting people to compare your writing to the greatest novelist who ever lived." - Jessica Bull

In this episode, Suzy Vadori sits down with Jessica Bull, the author of the Jane Austen-inspired mystery series "Miss Austen Investigates." Jessica shares her journey from working as a librarian to becoming a successful author and offers a glimpse into the creation of her debut novel.

Main Topics Discussed in this Episode:

Meet Jessica Bull: An introduction to Jessica Bull, author of "Miss Austen Investigates." Jessica's background includes studying English Literature and Information Science, working as a librarian, and eventually transitioning to a career in communications consulting.

The Inspiration Behind the Book: Jessica discusses how her love for Jane Austen and the challenges of the pandemic led her to write "Miss Austen Investigates," a murder mystery featuring a young Jane Austen as the protagonist.

Journey to Publication: Jessica shares the story of how she got her book published, including the challenges of querying, receiving warm rejections, and eventually securing her literary agent and going to auction.

Crafting a Unique Voice: Jessica talks about the importance of finding her own voice while writing in the tradition of Austen fiction, and how she balanced staying true to Jane Austen's character while creating a compelling mystery.

The Importance of Community: Suzy and Jessica discuss the role of writing communities and support systems, including how Jessica's participation in Suzy's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp helped her develop her novel.

Success and Beyond: Jessica reflects on the excitement and challenges of seeing her book published in multiple territories and languages, and shares her gratitude for the positive reception from readers and the literary community.

You can connect with Jessica on social media at:

X: @NovelistJessica

Instagram: @jessicabullnovelist

Find her books here: https://linktr.ee/missausteninvestigates

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3. [Show, don't Tell Page Review] Historical Fiction with Wayne

Tue, 16 Jul 2024 03:00:00 -0600

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Episode 3: Show, don’t Tell Page Submission: Historical Fiction with Wayne

Welcome to another episode of Show Don't Tell Writing with Suzy Vadori! In this episode, Suzy offers a live coaching session, diving deep into a listener's submission from their novel. This episode is packed with valuable insights and practical tips to help you refine your own writing. Whether you're a novice writer or working on your tenth novel, you'll find actionable advice to enhance your storytelling skills.

Main Topics Discussed in this Episode:

Grounding the Scene:
- Suzy emphasizes the need to ground readers in the scene right away, explaining the key elements that should be included at the start of every chapter to avoid confusion and keep readers immersed.
Character Introduction:
- Tips on effectively introducing characters and establishing their unique voices and perspectives early on.
Setting and Atmosphere:
- How to paint a vivid picture of the setting without info-dumping
- How to include historical information in order to show the reader the scene and setting without having to come right out and say a specific date.

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2. Four Must Haves at the Top of Every Scene in Your Book

Tue, 16 Jul 2024 02:00:00 -0600

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Episode 2: Four Must-Haves at the Top of Every Scene in Your Book

In this episode of "Show Don't Tell Writing," Suzy Vadori delves into the critical elements that need to be at the top of every scene to keep your readers hooked. Learn why some books fail to engage and discover the simple checklist that ensures your scenes are compelling and grounded. Suzy breaks down the psychological phenomenon known as the doorway effect and its impact on your writing, offering practical advice to make your story irresistible from the first paragraph.

Main Topics of This Episode Include:

Introduction to the four must-haves at the top of every scene to engage readers.
Explanation of the doorway effect and its relevance to writing.
The importance of grounding readers in each scene to prevent them from feeling lost and disengaged.

Key Points and Checklist:

Whose Head Are They In?
- Establish the point of view (POV) quickly
- Use inner thoughts, reactions, actions, or dialogue to clarify POV.
Who Is in the Scene?
- Clarify who is present in the scene right from the beginning.
- Avoid surprises later in the scene that confuse the reader.
Where Are Your Characters in Time?
- Ground the reader in the specific time relative to the previous scene.
- Ensure smooth transitions in the timeline to keep the reader oriented.
What’s Around Your Characters?
- Provide specific details about the setting within the first two paragraphs.
- Use interaction with the setting to avoid info dumping and keep the narrative moving.

Practical Advice:

Avoid assuming readers remember details from previous scenes.
Consistently apply the grounding technique to maintain reader engagement.
Balance providing essential information quickly without making it feel mechanical.

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1. The One Quality That Means a Writer Will be Successful, Every Time

Tue, 16 Jul 2024 01:00:00 -0600

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Episode 1: Do You Have What It Takes to Be a Writer?

Welcome to the very first episode of "Show Don't Tell Writing" with your host, Suzy Vadori! In this episode, Suzy dives into the one key quality that guarantees a writer's success—and it's not talent. Debunking Hollywood myths about overnight successes, she emphasizes the importance of learning and practicing the craft of writing. Whether you're just starting your writing journey or looking to improve, this episode is packed with insights to help you transform your storytelling. Join Suzy as she shares her own experiences and offers practical advice to help you write stories that captivate and engage readers.

Main Topics of This Episode Include:

The one quality that ensures a writer's success: being open to learning
Debunking the myth of innate talent and overnight success in writing
Comparing the process of becoming a writer to learning other professions

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Thu, 11 Apr 2024 13:00:00 -0600

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If writing advice and the lingo used in the publishing industry usually sounds like gobbledygook to you, look no further than this Show, don’t Tell Writing podcast.

I’m Author, Editor, and Book Coach Suzy Vadori, and I’m absolutely obsessed with helping writers get their ideas onto the page in a way that readers LOVE. If you think Show, don’t Tell is just tired writing advice, prepare to have your eyes opened as I break down the process of applying this key technique in both fiction and nonfiction books, sharing step-by-step actions each week you can take immediately to get closer each week to your wildest writing dreams, whether you’re writing your first book, or your tenth, all while making the process inspiring and fun.

If you want your book to get published, read, loved, and shared with readers all over the world, I’ll address the questions that are sooo hard to find answers for.

Is your writing good enough to be published in today’s market? What are the unwritten rules that can make agents, publishers, and readers give your book 5-star reviews? Do you have what it takes to make it as a writer? Hint: You definitely do, but nobody is born knowing how to write a terrific book, so join us to give yourself an advantage over all the other books out there by adding to your writing skills, and getting the straight goods on the industry.

In this weekly show, I’ll bring you writing techniques, best practices, motivation, inspirational stories from real live authors out there making it in the world, and actionable advice that can help you turn that book you’re writing into the bestseller you know deep down that it can be. I’ll even share the tangible, step-by-step writing advice that I used to escape her daily grind of being a corporate executive to make a living doing all things writing,and living my best creative life. I’ll be interviewing top writing experts and authors who give you the straight goods on what it takes to make it as a writer. Knowing these writing truths has given me the opportunity to work with thousands of writers over the past decade who have seen their writing dreams come true, and doors open for them that they hadn’t even thought of when they started their journey.

If you’re ready to stop spinning your wheels on your book’s draft and get serious about making your writing the best it can be, don't miss an episode – subscribe or follow today, and visit my website at www.suzyvadori.com for more writing resources and updates.

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